Moody and accomplished. Top work!
Moody and accomplished. Top work!
Absolutely love this! I've listened 3 times in a row! So much interesting stuff going here. Great work!
I really like the vibe, and suits what you describe. However there are points where your 3 instruments, bass strings and piano are simultaneously in different keys. At best, it doesn't sound calming. At worst, it sounds completely incorrect!
There are ways you can experiment with clashes and dissonance that can be very effective, however I think cramming a lot of this at the end of every phrase isn't the one. Pick a key, and make sure that all your instruments stick to it and I think you'll have a much more effective piece.
Trust, I feel you.
I was quite young when I made this track, I think it was almost 11 years ago. One of the key things that was asked of me was to make it dissonant in spots but I was certainly too green to really understand how it could be harnessed correctly. I spent a lot of my career learning to develop my ear for it more and practicing just that ^^
Congrats on frontpaging! This is great :)
Thanks, Rob!!
This is really cool, like someone looking at a wasteland and accepting their fate that they have to try and save this world. Or something haha
im glad it inspired that for you ;D
Maaaaate this is so cool, and great to see you improving from feedback you've received!
Thank you for your review, wobwobrob :)
Very well thought out and keeping with the brief. Great collaboration!
I would add the brief to the Author Comments, I'm sure this would score higher if people see what you've nailed :)
Oh i made this by myself the people i mentioned were just part of a group i was assigned to
for the challenge
so they are doing there own challenge songs
Sweeter than a sweet potato ππ
Sounds really sad and reflective of the words. Good job!
Thanks for the review man,
I appreciate it.
Rob Glenister - game audio designer at your service! I compose in all styles so you're bound to find something you like. I love hearing new music and working with new people. If you think we would be a good fit, I would love to hear from you!
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